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Gray Wolf

Leather coated in gray stains.

The mug, is laying on the floor, the coffee.

Is spilling out.

The wolf, slowly, comes closer.


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Structured: Western
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The imagery in your poem is intriguing, with vivid descriptions that evoke a sense of mystery and tension. The use of short, fragmented lines creates a sense of urgency and suspense, drawing the reader into the scene. However, the poem feels incomplete, leaving the reader wanting more resolution or development of the narrative. Consider expanding on the interactions between the wolf and the spilled coffee to deepen the emotional impact and provide a more cohesive storyline. Additionally, exploring the symbolism of the gray stains on the leather and their connection to the wolf could add layers of meaning to your poem.

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