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Red, is it just a color ?
Blood red line in the shape of a curve, in the middle of the canvas.
Of 6" by "6 inches.
Under the red curve, in the middle, the eyes.
Black pupils, with whites around. Of old wrinkled. Black man.
The image sounds.
Lower C4 and then C5, C6, D5 and D7 and D4. It plays with a form.
!!!!!!!!!! The Laugh. !!!!!!!!!!!!
All I can hear now is his laugh. Terrible, C4, C5, and C6. Later my Cry.
D5, D7 and D4.
I wonder if red is an anger or a panic.
It's quite a dangerous of all expressions.
I see: !!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!! !! !!! !!!!!
!!! !
In his eyes,
but I do not trust him.
Style / type:
Structured: Western
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Contest:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Fri, 2024-06-14 03:20
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