The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem "WORDS JUST WORDS" presents a complex exploration of language, spirituality, human evolution, and environmental concerns. The use of rhetorical questions and statements of fact contribute to the overarching theme of the poem, which seems to be a critique of human actions and their consequences on the world.

The first two stanzas focus on the power of words and their potential misuse. The concept of words dissolving into air could be further clarified to enhance the reader's understanding. The metaphor of words as poems is intriguing, but it might be beneficial to elaborate on this idea to fully convey its significance.

The third and fourth stanzas delve into spirituality and human evolution. The transition between these two themes could be smoother. The references to "schooled deity", "righteous theory", and "diverse divinity" are somewhat ambiguous and could be made clearer. The stanza about ancestors painting caves is a strong image, but the connection to the previous stanza could be strengthened.

The final two stanzas address wealth and environmental degradation. The transition from the previous themes to these is abrupt. The poem could benefit from more seamless transitions between its various themes. The metaphor of the earth weeping could be expanded upon to evoke a stronger emotional response from the reader.

The poem's rhythm and rhyme scheme are consistent, which aids in its readability. However, some lines are longer than others, which disrupts the flow. The poem could benefit from a more consistent line length.

Overall, the poem is thought-provoking and addresses important themes. By refining some of its metaphors, clarifying its themes, and improving its transitions and line lengths, the poem could have an even stronger impact.

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This really is a fascinating topic. There is so much to learn about ourselves, where we came from, who we are as a whole. It is not just as plain as where we were born or who we were raised by. We are full of ancestral DNA that goes back generations. We hold attributes that are like no one else in our immediate family (even physical) but may be that of someone related to us ages ago. I like how you referenced our ancestors painting on caves with art. It was the earliest form of communication in some cultures. Well done!

of such a complicated theme, that it is hard to relgulate it to a persistent meter.
I do think that you might at least try to keep it within a single beat, [which in most cases will be unnoticable].

I will give you some of my ideas on how to, without I think, losing any of the thoughts.

Which take our words for their newborn prayers [take instead of took.][ newborn to add beats].

In birth and death, grow imagination [grow, to keep the tenses]. [leaving out the we doesn't seem to hurt the perception of the line].

to learn from words, as they [do] surface [add a beat, with do].

Did they mislead us with information? [Leaving out the how, doesn't seem to change the line idea].

In practice the [old] righteous theory [fits with the next line] now grows weak in each generation

Humans born [in] diverse divinity

stare into the past of eternity

I will leave you to figure out the rest; as always, my advice is yours to use it, abuse it,[twist it] or lose it as you wish.

~ Geez.
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Hello, Ruby,
I agree with RoseBlack - fascinating theme with so many different directions. When I think of the artwork in caves, I tend to think of the many emojies, graphic symbols and pictures we now use in communicating instead of using actual words. I am curious about the "gold and money" and "no milk, nor honey." I'll read again after your response.
Thank you!
L

It seems as if this is the final countdown to extinction and it can be daunting. I got so depressed thinking about this I finally just admittedly disassociated from it. Probably not healthy but that’s my survival technique. I’m not in denial. I do what I can. Beyond that, I’m unattached.

I enjoyed the poem. I see the A team has lent their advice and I read it after some edits. It’s a good one for sure and they’re all correct difficult subject with a lot of emotions and variables.

Excellent work
Tim

I would have loved to smoke a joint with you when I was younger...the conversation we would have had would have been epic! I love your mind!!!

*love & smiles, Cat & eddy