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Windows, Rain, and Human speech.
When the time is right.
And the music starts, rain is like a rainbow.
No human can just fly.
Flight is for the animals,
Who really wish to speak.
Speaking like a human is just a man and woman tricks.
Asking about questions, end up as curious as the life is
Nothing really question, wrong,
people, deeds.
Humanity.
Then speech.
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Sat, 2023-12-30 04:00
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