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Time to think!

Submitted by Leslie on Fri, 2023-05-19 14:00

Maybe, just maybe
movement,
space and
matter
rolled up in a little ball
are tucked away,
in a corner of the multiverse
Left alone to find
thier own unique expression
As they grow into conciousness
And are displayed in thier innocence
As children of thier higher power!

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neopoet

Fri, 2023-05-19 14:00

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Obadiah Grey

Tue, 2023-06-20 13:42

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Very surprised that this didn't attract more attention.
Firstly, not one reference to yourself to be found, Bravo!
Secondly, it actually,,,, "made me think"!
Thirdly, I have a sneaking suspicion that we may
turn out to be God !!!!!!

Obi.

Pssssst, few typos,,,,,,, shhhhh, they might not notice .

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