The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

This poem has a clear theme and focus, which is the speaker's love for the sky. The use of personification, as seen in phrases like "the dark night lifts its canopy" and "the sun breaks through", adds a sense of dynamism and life to the sky, enhancing the emotional connection between the speaker and the sky.

The poem could benefit from a more consistent use of meter. While some lines have a clear rhythmic pattern, others do not, which can disrupt the flow of the poem. For example, the line "The morning breaks and leaves behind" has a different rhythm compared to the line "A teardrop from my eye". Consistency in rhythm can help to create a more harmonious and engaging reading experience.

The imagery in this poem is vivid and engaging, particularly in lines like "A rainbow fills the sky" and "A teardrop from my eye". However, the poem could benefit from a more varied use of figurative language. Metaphors, similes, and other forms of figurative language can add depth and complexity to the poem, making it more engaging for the reader.

The ending of the poem, with its declaration of love for the sky, is effective in bringing the poem's theme to a clear and powerful conclusion. However, the phrase "My passion for the sky!!" could be rephrased to avoid repetition and to provide a more impactful ending. For example, the speaker could describe how their passion for the sky manifests or affects them, rather than simply stating that they have a passion for the sky.

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Loves rainbows. I loved this. It made me think of how excited she gets when she sees all the colours. Beautiful imagry

This is lovely and thought provoking. Your rhyme schemes are improving all the time and the poem flowed beautifully. Punctuation would help with the meter and flow but it is a great job, well done. Ruby :) xx

This poem is elegant in its structure. It has both heart and soul! my favorite lines are:

My love for thee
Is not contained
I lift my head and sigh
Extending love
So graciously
My passion for the sky!!

A lovely entry

*many hugs, Cat
I wish i could write like that!