The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem "Scottish Dream" exhibits a strong narrative voice and a clear sense of rhythm and rhyme. It is evident that the author has chosen to use an AABB rhyme scheme, which effectively enhances the flow of the poem.

However, the poem could benefit from a more consistent meter. The lines vary in length and syllable count, which can disrupt the rhythm and flow of the poem. For instance, the second line of the second stanza, "Let the wind now carry you," has six syllables, while the fourth line, "for that heart inside of you?" has seven. This inconsistency can make the poem feel uneven.

The poem also uses a variety of imagery, such as "giant ginger," "ruddy hair," and "eyes of blue," which help to create a vivid picture in the reader's mind. However, the meaning of some of these images could be clarified. For example, the term "giant ginger" could be interpreted in several ways, and it's not immediately clear what the poet is referring to.

The poem's theme of growth and maturation is clear and effectively conveyed. The use of direct address ("Hey now ho! my giant ginger!") and the repeated references to the subject as "my son" create a sense of intimacy and personal connection.

However, the poem could benefit from a deeper exploration of this theme. The lines "you have grown, so quick to manhood / and endured a trial or two" suggest a story of growth and struggle, but these ideas are not fully developed. Expanding on these ideas could add depth and complexity to the poem.

Lastly, the poem's use of questions ("You will search the whole world over / for that heart inside of you?") effectively engages the reader and invites them to reflect on the poem's themes. However, the use of punctuation could be improved. The question mark at the end of the line "for that heart inside of you?" is unnecessary, as the line is not phrased as a question. Removing this question mark could improve the clarity of the poem.

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Congratulations to you and your son on his accomplishments in Drumming! My favorite lines of this poem are:

Now my son go forward gently
let your spirit be renewed
take your lass along beside you
and be faithful, strong and true

*hugs, Cat

This is impressive, Leslie.
I was really plugging fer yer "Giant ginger",
wishing him well on his way,,,,
and hoping he "got his oats",,,, bravo!

errrrm, perhaps one or two too many "you"s?

Obi........