The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

In terms of structure, the poem adheres to a minimalist approach, which can be effective in conveying a powerful message with few words. However, the use of repetition (e.g., "one day," "my heart") could be further exploited to create a stronger rhythmic pattern or to emphasize the emotional tension in the poem.

The poem's theme, centered around forgiveness and memory, is a universal one that can resonate with many readers. However, the language used to express this theme is quite straightforward and lacks the use of figurative language, imagery, or other poetic devices that could deepen the emotional impact and complexity of the poem.

The line "But the heart, my heart, will never forget" could benefit from more specificity or a unique turn of phrase to make it more memorable and impactful. As it stands, it is a rather common sentiment that does not offer a fresh perspective or insight into the theme of forgiveness and memory.

In terms of tone, the poem maintains a consistent tone of solemnity and regret, which effectively communicates the speaker's emotional state. However, the poem could benefit from a more varied or nuanced emotional landscape to create a more engaging and dynamic reading experience.

Overall, the poem has a clear and relatable theme but could benefit from more inventive language, varied emotional tones, and a more distinctive voice to make it stand out and resonate more deeply with readers.

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Hello, Kristen,
With such wonderful brevity, an appropriate title is necessary. I think this one is perfect, but you've stated you aren't satisfied with it. I'm reminded that it's no longer the person who we can't forget, but the impact of the heartache. This sounds like it was truly severe, and your raw title affirms that. But I'll be back to see what you've decided!
Thank you!
L

critique for this piece, but I do have a title if you wish. How about "Scarified Heart" ?
~ Geez.
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Brevity at it's best.
I suggest " A Too Hurt Heart" or A Broken Heart"