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Poem without a Verb

3 lines almost too long
for the attention span
of an excited gnat

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Review Request (Direction): 
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content


weird thought, that invited me in and gave me pause.
Not earth-shaking, but just weird, it made me ponder,
like WTH is he thinking? Anyway, it made me smile to think
that you and I had connected; you, thinking about writing it
and me thinking; WTH is he thinking? LoL
~ Geezer.

There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

just food for thought, a small snack for your brain to chew over, glad you smiled ))

author comment

Hello, Sen,
Very nice! You've captured action, motion and movement.
Thank you!

3 lines the of the toughest I've had to write !

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