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Plane train auto crash porn
Thanks for confirming you can’t be taken seriously
with the latest inanity
pseudo-shock and vanity
buttressing what we already knew
when there’s nothing new
dystopia carries the day
Say will some it’s wrought independently
thoughts laid down so artfully
calculated or thrown together
it matters little
an original piece or not
disturbing the peace has a certain cachet
Even if it tumbles out ponderously
leaden by trying furiously
to stir with a blob or gobs of words
pointless as noxious wine snobs
intoxicated
on an elixir of self-importance
Escapes to nowhere irritate incessantly
grating Neal was right you see
at the end of the day
even if well meaning
with a veneer of gladness hiding sadness
every tale by every Del should have a point
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neopoet
Mon, 2024-03-11 20:41
Neopoet AI 5-29-23 version
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Richard Milne
Tue, 2024-03-12 15:20
AI stands for "automated inoffensiveness"?
Once again "not feasible" to offer feedback. Guess I should surmise it means "if you can't say anything nice, don't say anything at all."
Candlewitch
Tue, 2024-03-12 15:40
hello!
AI is an idiot!
*always, Cat
*
When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
Richard Milne
Tue, 2024-03-12 16:43
Thank you
As you indicated, AI as in Automated Idiot. Appreciate your response. Best wishes to you in all you do...