The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

This poem effectively employs the use of metaphors and contrasts to convey its message. The first line, "Hearts clash like thunder," is a strong metaphor that vividly illustrates conflict. However, the transition to "Yet love's gentle hand can heal" could be more seamless. This abrupt shift might disrupt the reader's flow and comprehension.

The poem's structure adheres to the traditional haiku format of 5-7-5 syllables, which is commendable. However, the essence of haiku is not only about syllable count but also includes the incorporation of a 'kigo' or season word, and a 'kireji' or cutting word, both of which seem to be missing in this poem.

The last line, "Hope's song lingers on," while evocative, could benefit from more specific imagery. As it stands, it's a bit abstract and may not resonate as deeply with the reader. Consider specifying what aspect of hope is lingering or how it's doing so to create a more impactful ending.

In terms of rhythm, the poem maintains a consistent flow, which is beneficial for reader engagement. However, the poem could benefit from more varied language to avoid the repetition of 's' sounds in the second and third lines, which can make the poem sound monotonous.

Overall, the poem effectively communicates its theme of peace versus war, but could benefit from more seamless transitions, more specific imagery, and varied language.

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I like it very much, great Haiku and a powerful theme!

with both the poem being a great haiku, and a contest with various forms being a requirement. Nice job, Clentin. ~ Geez.
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very succinct