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OUT WITH THE FAIRIES

Submitted by Alex Tanner on Tue, 2023-10-03 17:24

I should be out now
In the warmth of the sun.
Playing with Fairies,
We would have such fun.

What's that I hear?
Two and two make four!
I really don't care
School can be such a bore.

Oh! this classroom seat
So hard on my bum.
(Can I say that?)
Please don't tell my mum.

Still the Fairies will wait
Till the day ends
With the ringing of the bell
Then it's off with my friends.

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Wed, 2023-10-04 08:10

Precious words to go with the image. Loved it. Ruby :)

Give and grow - let's raise our verses together. I'm happy to comment on your work and appreciate a comment on mine.

Thu, 2023-10-05 06:09

Saw the picture, thought of one of my granddaughters and knocked it off. Alex

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Wed, 2023-10-04 21:42

Hello, Alex,
I agree with Ruby! Precious poetry to go along with the prompt!
L

Thu, 2023-10-05 06:10

Saw the picture, thought of one of my granddaughters and knocked it off. Alex

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