The below is a computer generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

suggested line edit

The poem "NO MORE SHIT PLEASE" is a straightforward critique of the overwhelming presence of waste and pollution in our modern world. The use of the word "shit" throughout the poem serves to emphasize the pervasive and overwhelming nature of the problem. The repetition of the phrase "there's shit" in the first stanza creates a sense of hopelessness and resignation towards the issue at hand.

The second stanza, however, introduces a sense of anger and frustration towards those in power who are not taking responsibility for the problem. The use of the phrase "Politicians don’t think shit, they don’t shittin’ care" is a bold statement that adds to the overall tone of the poem.

The final stanza brings the poem to a close by reiterating the despair and frustration felt towards the constant barrage of waste and pollution. The repetition of the word "shit" combined with the question "you know who shit's for" leaves the reader with a sense of unease and discomfort.

While the poem effectively conveys its message, one suggested line edit would be to replace "shittin'" with "giving a shit" in the line "Politicians don’t think shit, they don’t shittin’ care." This change would maintain the poem's use of expletives while also adding a layer of irony to the statement. By using a phrase that implies caring about something, the line becomes more impactful and highlights the lack of action by those in power.

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...S2,L4 repeats the same thought now. Not sure if ai understands that.
If you're taking suggestions..
politicians shit shit and they don't shittin' care.

Nice rant. Should open eyes, but....cheers anyway

Thomas