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The New Year

Submitted by Clentin on Fri, 2023-12-29 04:28

Resolutions made
The day of the year arrives
Unseen, unfulfilled

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Editing - rough draft
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Not Explicit Content

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Rosewood Apothecary

Fri, 2023-12-29 06:23

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It is about nature in a seasonal manner and seems to have a “cutting” word which I’d say would be arrives. We have verb tense issue with the second line and I suggest “the DAY of the year arrives” for correction. I guessing that’s actually a typo.

Nice job
Tim

Clentin

Fri, 2023-12-29 06:33

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Thank you. For reading and comments.

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