The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem titled "A Poem of Protest" effectively uses the Luddite metaphor to express concerns about environmental degradation and corporate greed. The poem's structure is consistent, which aids in the delivery of its message. However, there are areas that could be improved for clarity and impact.

1. Rhyme and Rhythm: The poem seems to follow an ABAB rhyme scheme in the first two stanzas but deviates in the subsequent ones. Consistency in rhyme scheme can enhance the musicality of the poem and make it more engaging. Additionally, the rhythm of the poem is somewhat uneven due to the varying lengths of lines. Maintaining a consistent meter could improve the flow and readability of the poem.

2. Grammar and Punctuation: There are a few grammatical errors and punctuation inconsistencies that disrupt the flow of the poem. For example, in the line "And if we needed more the, land rewards our labours," the comma placement seems incorrect.

3. Clarity of Message: The poem's message could be made clearer with more specific imagery and examples. The reference to Greta Thunberg and the Titanic are effective, but more such instances could strengthen the poem's argument and make it more relatable to the reader.

4. Final Stanza: The last line of the poem seems to be incomplete or unclear. It might be beneficial to rephrase this line to ensure that the poem's conclusion is as strong and impactful as its beginning.

5. Use of Language: The poem uses a relatively simple language, which makes it accessible. However, the use of more poetic devices such as metaphors, similes, and alliteration could enhance the poem's aesthetic appeal.

Overall, the poem presents a compelling argument and effectively uses the Luddite metaphor to critique modern society's environmental and economic practices. With some refinement in terms of structure, grammar, clarity, and language use, it could be even more impactful.

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this is an incredibly well thought out piece which asks the reader to think about all the changes we have been subjected to by big bushiness foul breath of greed. your poem appeals to me because I have always resisted change as a whole. I do favor change in personal growth and learning. thanks for this.

*love, Cat

an orator of some skill, trying this one on for size. Of course, it might need a little bit of adjustment for the speaker, but...
I see where your strengths lie and would like to see you stretch out and use your great vocabulary to paint your pictures with simpler, but more compact lines. The way to build a rhythm and meter that moves smoothly, is to make the words count for you. Sometimes, when a line is short or long a syllable, it doesn't matter, because the word fits so snugly where it belongs.
I like where you are, now let's see what you got. ~ Geez.
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I like what you have done here. You are always up for a challenge, and I think you've got this one down. How about a funny, light-hearted kind of piece? ~ Geez.
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Hi, Ruby,
Well said, throughout. Very well said.
I've never suggested in another poet's comment section to read any of my poems, so please forgive me now, but I wrote a poem titled "Ring, New Year Bells." I tend to get overwhelmed and dark when I think about the state of our beautiful earth, especially as we are passing her along to innocent generations to come. We can only have Hope!
Peace!
L