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loves philosophy

The fountains mingle with the river and the rivers ocean, The winds of heaven mix for ever with a sweet emotion; nothing in the world is single ,All things law divine In one another's being migle *** Why not i with thine ? see the mountains kiss high heaven, And the waves clasp one another ; No sister *** flower would be forgiven if it disdain'd its brother; And the sunlight clasps the earth , And the moonbeams kiss the sea*** What is all this sweet work worth if thou kiss not me ?

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The poem "loves philosophy" explores the interconnectedness of nature and uses it as a metaphor for the desire for love and connection between individuals. The repetition of the phrase "And the [element] [action] [another element]" creates a rhythmic structure that reinforces the theme of unity.

One suggestion for improvement is to refine the use of punctuation. The poem contains several instances of missing or misplaced punctuation marks, which can disrupt the flow and clarity of the poem. For example, in the line "All things law divine In one another's being migle ***," it would be helpful to clarify the intended punctuation after "migle."

Additionally, consider expanding on the imagery and metaphors used in the poem. While the concept of interconnectedness is effectively conveyed, further development of specific examples and descriptions could enhance the overall impact of the poem. This could involve exploring the emotions and sensations associated with the elements and their interactions.

Overall, "loves philosophy" presents a compelling exploration of love and

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