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rumers
I know you're hearing that chitchat
But I want you and that′s facts
Aw man you been that
Since things don't pick up
I'm tryna earn more than your trust
And when it′s said and done
I′m tryna come home to your love
I'll remind them they loving the way that you walk, walk
(Yeah)
Why they whispering to you, you notice its talk, talk oh
Caught in the rumors, don′t get caught in the rumors
Baby what's gonna move ya, (yeah) you know i′m true to you
Don't get caught in the rumors, don′t get caught in the rumors
Baby what's gonna move ya, (yeah) you know I'm true to you oh
(Yeah) true to
Moving crowns but I′m tryna move you (yeah)
Pins and needles girl this ain′t voodoo
Tryna get this feeling to you oh
Shot such a ego, you know they line like a free throw
You ain't got time to be single
We know, you and me know
I′ll remind them they loving the way that you walk, walk
(Yeah)
Why they whispering to you, you notice it's talk, talk oh
Caught in the rumors, don′t get caught in the rumors
Baby what's gonna move ya, (yeah) you know i′m true to you
Don't get caught in the rumors, don't go get caught in the rumors
Baby what′s gonna move ya, (yeah) you know i′m true to you
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Sun, 2023-06-25 20:11
Neopoet AI 5-29-23 version
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