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Lite love
He said, “let there be light”
and there you were.
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its basic but i adore Mr Wilde and ive been reading his stuff for a long while.
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neopoet
Sat, 2024-06-22 12:01
Neopoet AI 5-29-23 version
The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:
The poem "Lite love" is concise and impactful, using only a few words to convey a profound message. The reference to "let there be light" evokes themes of creation and the power of words. The brevity of the poem leaves room for interpretation, inviting readers to reflect on the significance of the words spoken and the sudden appearance of "you." Consider expanding on the imagery or delving deeper into the emotions or implications behind the statement. Overall, this poem has the potential to spark thought and reflection in its readers.
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tyro
Sat, 2024-06-22 16:44
I like it, very catchy, gives
I like it, very catchy, gives so much room to the imagination
tyro
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The most powerful reaction
of mind on mind
is transference of sight
zuella
Sun, 2024-06-23 01:01
Hey Tyro!
Thanks for the comment! I appreciate it!!
The normal fear the poets and the poets fear the normal.
Thank you for your time!
-Zuella
author commentRoseBlack
Sun, 2024-06-23 09:20
I really like this
I think I said something similar to my boyfriend. I had been in the dark for so long, I didn't think light was possible and then there he was. changed everything for me in a literal minute. Short and impactful. Well done.
~RoseBlack~
Lavender
Sun, 2024-06-23 15:14
Lite Love
Hello, Zuella,
I echo the other comments! This let my imagination travel to wherever my heart wanted to go.
Very nice!
L