The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

This poem appears to explore the theme of religious absolutism, asserting the supremacy of one deity over others. It uses a combination of biblical language and contemporary expressions to create a unique voice.

The poem could benefit from a more consistent rhythm and rhyme scheme. The current structure seems to fluctuate, which can disrupt the flow for the reader. For instance, the second stanza has an AABB rhyme scheme, while the third stanza follows an ABAB pattern. Consistency in this area could enhance the overall reading experience.

The poem's message could be clarified. The speaker's identity is somewhat ambiguous. If the speaker is intended to be a deity, the use of phrases such as "I’ve had my fun" could be reconsidered as they may not align with traditional depictions of divine entities.

The poem could also delve deeper into its exploration of religious absolutism. It mentions several deities but does not fully explore the implications of their inclusion. Further development in this area could add depth to the poem's thematic content.

Finally, the poem could benefit from more vivid and unique imagery. While it does employ some interesting metaphors, such as "fire burns sallow skin," more could be done to paint a vivid picture for the reader.

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I'm more prone to superstition than religion, for I would rather believe that a bat flying into my house
means bad luck; than some guy sitting up in the sky, keeping count of all my little sins [and a few big ones]
and lets me know that I'm on the edge everyday, unless I repent. Of course, if I re-sin, I'm always welcome
to come back and confess my backsliding, say a few prayers, and put some more money in the pot, and
I'm probably good. I find it far easier to believe that aliens have messed around with our DNA, didn't like what they got
and wiped it out and tried again. [Numerous times]. Anyway, you set off a whole bunch of thoughts, that I will re-explore.
See: /www.neopoet.com/workshop/poems/goddamn
~ Geez.
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if I had sent it to you or you had mentioned that you read it before. I think that by whatever name you call them, the scenario is the same.

I would use [where] instead of when for the first line.

[Where] fire burns [your] sallow skin.

Here on Earth, we say that [those] sounds

There are more... but I'm not going to do all the work for you.

I'm sure that you can see what needs to be done.

I'll keep coming back. ~ Geez.
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the fault is mine. I was having the bad day. As you say, I also have my faults, and I suppose that making a comment like that could be taken that way. I merely meant that I didn't want to do for you, what I know you can do yourself. You have never taken umbrage at anything I've said before this, and in fact been most gracious and accepting while giving me credit for anything I've helped with. Please forgive my faux pas. ~ Geez.
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