The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem "I Am" presents an intriguing exploration of identity, employing a variety of metaphors and similes to convey a multifaceted sense of self. The repetition of the phrase "I am" throughout the poem creates a strong rhythmic structure, which effectively emphasizes the theme of self-definition.

However, the poem could benefit from more specificity and concrete imagery. While the abstract nature of many of the lines contributes to the poem's exploration of identity, it may also make it difficult for readers to fully engage with the poem. More specific, tangible descriptions could help to ground the poem and make its themes more accessible.

Additionally, the poem's structure could be refined. The consistent use of the "I am" phrase, while effective in some ways, also risks becoming monotonous. Experimenting with varied sentence structures or introducing new rhythmic patterns could help to maintain reader interest.

Finally, the poem's ending could be reworked to provide a more satisfying conclusion. The current ending leaves the reader with a question, which can be an effective way to provoke thought. However, it also feels somewhat abrupt, and does not fully tie together the themes explored throughout the poem. A more definitive ending could provide a stronger sense of closure.

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this tells a lot about who you think you are. I wonder how much of it is who you want to be? I am torn between having all those "I am" beginnings and what else you could say. They make the whole thing work, so I guess it's a good thing.
Nice work! ~ Geez.
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I like how it says so much about you and your emotions. I think the consistent I am at the beginning of each line works well with the context of the poem. Maybe breaking them up into two lines stanzas to make it a bit easier on the reader? Like pair that rhymes. Just a suggestion to make it easier for the reader and keep their attention. Well done.

Hello, Ruby,
Just love this one. I really appreciate the repetition, too. It adds energy! The poem's pace seems to increase, as does its depth and meaning This is outstanding. There is a Pearl Jam song titled "Wishlist" which is very creative like your poem. Kinda sorta similar in style, a bit different in meaning, but your poem very much reminds me of the pace and flow. I wonder - "I am the voice who not dare speak" maybe "I am the voice who dares not speak"? And "I am the piece you're looking for..." at first I thought it was maybe a typo supposed to be "peace" but the more I read it, I think it's a pretty deep thought and a very cool line. Your rhythm and rhyme are so, so lovely! "I am the one who waits outside." Wow, I keep reading this over and over and find so much to love! Wonderful, wonderful!
Thank you!
Lx

Hello Ruby.
I've spend the last fifteen minutes reading your poem, which I like a great deal. The reason for the several re-reads is I keep asking myself, how much of the poem is you, how much of the poem is me, and how much of the poem is every one of us?

Have to go now and re-read it again. I suspect the answer to my questions is there somewhere and I suspect the answer is: "All of the above". Thanks for sharing, Will