The below is a computer generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem "Halley!" depicts the beauty and mystique of Halley's Comet as it traverses the sky. The use of vivid imagery, such as "starshine falls thru lovers eyes" and "icy wings," creates a sense of wonder and enchantment. The poet's choice of words, such as "mesmerizes" and "mistress," add to the ethereal quality of the poem.

However, the poem could benefit from some improvements. The title "Halley!" is somewhat abrupt and does not fully capture the essence of the poem. A more descriptive title could draw readers in and create a clearer sense of what the poem is about. Additionally, the poem's structure feels disjointed, with some lines feeling disconnected from the overall flow of the piece. With some minor tweaks, the poem could achieve a more cohesive and polished feel.

One suggested line edit could be:

"Heavens herald, mesmerizes" to "Heaven's herald, she mesmerizes" to clarify the subject of the sentence and create a smoother flow.

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Hi, there!
Hmm...I'll need to respectfully differ with AI's assessment of your title - I find it to be pretty perfect! I've noticed your use of punctuation in your titles, and this time, I find it really adds to the feeling and excitement of the poem. Beautiful language throughout, and it feels like a sincere love and appreciation for the comet. A couple places needing correction: lovers' eyes, heaven's herald. I'm wondering if the word "thru" should be the more formal "through" - the poem is so elegant. Also, the use of the word "dark" is mentioned a couple times pretty close together. Maybe describe one of the areas a little differently? I enjoyed this poem and its adoration of the comet!
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