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Every drop

Submitted by kowque on Thu, 2024-06-20 18:46

My body cries
For you
Every day
I miss you,
With every pore,every tear,every breath

God,just give back my Koko
I'll behave

Just give me back my mother

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Fri, 2024-06-21 00:50

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Leslie

Fri, 2024-06-21 05:39

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Separation is hard, but I hope that writing takes away some of your sorrow!

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Successively until our languages become one!

RoseBlack

Sat, 2024-06-22 05:58

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You find solace in your writing. Grief and missing someone is challenging and we all need an outlet from it. Take care of yourself and take this time to heal. Hugs

~RoseBlack~

Candlewitch

Sat, 2024-06-22 15:50

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I agree with Carrie's thoughts and advice on this. Try to concentrate on the good memories and cherish them. I wish you all the best.

*hugs, Cat

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Lavender

Sun, 2024-06-23 15:35

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Hello, Koki,
I sense the heartache and pain. Like the other comments, I will add to the hope of peace and healing.
Thank you,
L

kowque

Sun, 2024-06-23 22:20

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Thank you

Koki

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