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Every drop
My body cries
For you
Every day
I miss you,
With every pore,every tear,every breath
God,just give back my Koko
I'll behave
Just give me back my mother
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Fri, 2024-06-21 00:50
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Leslie
Fri, 2024-06-21 05:39
kowque
Separation is hard, but I hope that writing takes away some of your sorrow!
The power of our language can and will change the world.
Successively until our languages become one!
RoseBlack
Sat, 2024-06-22 05:58
I hope
You find solace in your writing. Grief and missing someone is challenging and we all need an outlet from it. Take care of yourself and take this time to heal. Hugs
~RoseBlack~
Candlewitch
Sat, 2024-06-22 15:50
Dear Koki,
I agree with Carrie's thoughts and advice on this. Try to concentrate on the good memories and cherish them. I wish you all the best.
*hugs, Cat
*
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Lavender
Sun, 2024-06-23 15:35
Every Drop
Hello, Koki,
I sense the heartache and pain. Like the other comments, I will add to the hope of peace and healing.
Thank you,
L
kowque
Sun, 2024-06-23 22:20
❤️
Thank you
Koki