The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem "Death of emotion!" exhibits a strong use of imagery and rhythm, which aids in creating an immersive experience for the reader. The use of phrases such as "quell the winds of wanton cries" and "retreat to darkness" effectively convey a sense of despair and isolation.

However, the poem could benefit from a clearer thematic progression. While the first half of the poem effectively communicates a sense of emotional death and retreat, the second half seems to shift focus to a critique of the human race. This shift could be made smoother with transitional phrases or imagery that bridges the two themes.

Additionally, the last line "without true emotion" seems to contradict the title and the theme of the poem. If the poem is about the death of emotion, it might be more consistent to end with a line that reinforces this theme, rather than suggesting the existence of "true emotion".

Lastly, the poem could benefit from a more varied use of poetic devices. While the poem effectively uses rhyme and rhythm, the incorporation of other devices such as metaphor, simile, or alliteration could add depth and complexity to the poem.

Overall, the poem shows promise and with some refinement, could effectively convey its intended theme and emotion.

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Yes...I can feel the death, or at least the wish for the death of emotion. Some really nice language and choice of words - quell, wanton cries, blackened arms, encumbered...I can feel the frustration and agony.
Thank you!
L

Good job, I liked your poem. Deep and dark. The way you give the wind personification in these two lines:
To quell the winds
of wanton cries.
opens up the layers of the poem. Well done.
Ruby :) xx