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The Beauty Look

The radiant look exudes
like a sparking diamond
that it brings to the surface
of the glamorous glitter level
from a fascinating scenery view

Filled with the charisma of delight
from a blindfold glimpse sight
by a reading guide through
the alluring sign
Of the deceitful mind

A true beauty design
it showcases in the eyes
of the beholder that lies
far beyond skin color deep
form a true self-image pose

The exhibit of character portray
by the inner reflection mirror display
through instinct shine aglow
from the gracious of beauty show

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This poem effectively utilizes imagery and metaphor to discuss the concept of beauty, particularly the idea that true beauty lies beyond physical appearance. The use of phrases like "sparkling diamond," "glamorous glitter," and "fascinating scenery view" create a vivid and attractive image in the reader's mind. The poem then contrasts this with the idea of "the deceitful mind," suggesting that physical beauty can be misleading or superficial.

However, the poem could benefit from more consistency in its rhythm and meter. The irregularity of the line lengths and the inconsistent use of rhyme can make the poem feel disjointed and can disrupt the flow for the reader.

The poem also uses some complex and abstract language, such as "charisma of delight," "blindfold glimpse sight," and "inner reflection mirror display." While these phrases are evocative, they may be confusing for some readers. The poem may be more accessible if it used simpler and more concrete language to convey its ideas.

Finally, the poem's message about the nature of beauty is somewhat obscured by its abstract language and complex metaphors. The poem may be more effective if it made its central idea more explicit and developed it more fully. For example, it could provide specific examples or anecdotes to illustrate the idea that true beauty lies within, or it could explore this idea in more depth.

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