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Be Like A Goonie
Be like a goonie and
never say die.
Find your treasure
and see what's
inside.
You might travel so
far to see
what you really
truly want to be.
Do not cry cause
goonies do not.
So dry your eyes
and dust off your socks.
The road might be long
and a rocky road
but goonies always
have a heart of gold.
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Rosewood Apothecary
Fri, 2023-02-03 06:40
My top ten
Such a good film. My kids really like it. They don’t believe that we used to leave for entire days on bikes or in the woods. Our parents never knew where we were. We came home for lunch and dinner. Lol. Love it.
Tim
Heather Perry
Fri, 2023-02-03 19:50
Thank you
Thank you
Heather Perry
author commentCandlewitch
Fri, 2023-02-03 06:45
hello Heather!
the Goonies is one of my favorites, too! a little adventure is good for the soul!
*hugs, Cat
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Heather Perry
Fri, 2023-02-03 19:51
Thank you
Thank you and the Goonies is one of my favorites too.
Heather Perry
author commentHeather Perry
Fri, 2023-02-03 19:52
Thank you
Thank you for your comment
Heather Perry
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