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Paralysis
I write in my car these days.
It’s the only place I can think,
Find the time,
Breathe.
Everywhere else is too busy. Too much.
It feels like the Earth is spinning without me.
Maybe tomorrow I, too, will spin.
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
RoseBlack
Sat, 2022-10-01 13:44
The feeling
Of being frozen in place by overwhelming situations and emotions. The knowing that the feeling will pass and we will continue to move again. Well done!
~RoseBlack~
Kristen H.
Sun, 2022-10-09 00:05
That is
exactly right. Thank you!