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Flowers
Transient little puffs of life
Reach deeply from one soul
To another
Transferring to man small packets
Of beauty created by God
So we are able to experience a
Few moments of happiness today
And remind us of what may not
Be tomorrow
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Comments
Rosewood Apothecary
Mon, 2023-01-09 16:55
Yeah
That’s a good observation. If you think about it we sort of appreciate them from a purely aesthetic and artistic perspective. This is really a cool way of studying the reason why we give each other flowers.
Nice job,
Tim
Lavender
Mon, 2023-01-09 18:04
Flowers
Hello, Clentin,
A sincere appreciation for flowers, and life in its simple form. The first stanza seems so significant for me, I almost want to replace "reach" with "rooted" sensing such a deep connection from one soul to another.
Thank you!
L
Clentin
Mon, 2023-01-09 19:09
You may be right, rooted does
You may be right, rooted does fit better
RoseBlack
Mon, 2023-01-09 18:24
Beautiful
I have never thought of flowers in this way, although I enjoy them immensely. Thank you for sharing your simple, yet elegant perception of them.
~RoseBlack~
Clentin
Mon, 2023-01-09 19:08
Thank you for your comments!
Thank you for your comments!
lovedly
Thu, 2023-01-12 13:55
If you see my logo
I'm a born rose
deep rooted like aussies
you may know
new poet u r also