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Toll Collector
Grief never seems to care
about the currency I have,
be it pictures, memories, guilt or sorrow
It’s always been willing to work
with the materials at hand,
and accepts any and all
in payment for its’ services
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Review Request (Direction):
What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Last few words:
Grief makes yet another visit to my thoughts...
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Geezer
Wed, 2022-10-12 10:41
This sums it up...
I wouldn't try to say it better! Not a thing to change or anything more to say. ~ Geez.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
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Michael Anthony
Fri, 2022-10-14 10:33
Thank you Geez!
Thank you Geez!
Michael Anthony
Lavender
Wed, 2022-10-12 10:58
Toll Collector
Hello, Michael,
Perfectly stated. Not only visiting your thoughts, but it feels like your heart, as well.
L
Michael Anthony
Fri, 2022-10-14 10:34
Appreciate the visit L -
Appreciate the visit L - thank you!
Best
Michael Anthony
Rosewood Apothecary
Wed, 2022-10-12 12:43
Good title
Excellent in fact.
Tim
Michael Anthony
Fri, 2022-10-14 10:35
Thanks Tim! Best
Thanks Tim!
Best
Michael Anthony
Jackweb
Sat, 2022-10-15 02:10
Nice theme!
Majestic flight of feather. A light read.
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"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb
Michael Anthony
Wed, 2022-10-19 22:55
Thanks for stopping by JW!
Thanks for stopping by JW!
Cheers
Michael Anthony