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Toll Collector

Grief never seems to care
about the currency I have,
be it pictures, memories, guilt or sorrow

It’s always been willing to work
with the materials at hand,
and accepts any and all
in payment for its’ services

Style / type: 
Free verse
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I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
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Last few words: 
Grief makes yet another visit to my thoughts...
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Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

I wouldn't try to say it better! Not a thing to change or anything more to say. ~ Geez.
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Writing purely for oneself, is the ultimate in defensive posture.

Thank you Geez!

Michael Anthony

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Hello, Michael,
Perfectly stated. Not only visiting your thoughts, but it feels like your heart, as well.
L

Appreciate the visit L - thank you!

Best

Michael Anthony

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Excellent in fact.

Tim

Thanks Tim!

Best

Michael Anthony

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Majestic flight of feather. A light read.
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"Poetry is invariably imbued with a sense of calm and serenity".

~Jackweb

Thanks for stopping by JW!

Cheers

Michael Anthony

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