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This poem presents a poignant commentary on the state of spirituality in modern society. The speaker's search for open-minded individuals in a church setting highlights the lack of engagement and critical thinking present in many religious communities. The use of rhyme and repetition throughout the poem effectively emphasizes the speaker's frustration and disappointment with the status quo.

One suggested line edit would be to change "to remain bound" to "remaining bound" in the sixth stanza to maintain consistent verb tense.

Overall, this poem effectively communicates a sense of disillusionment with organized religion and encourages readers to consider the importance of independent thought and questioning in matters of faith.

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point of critique, is that I think you need a comma between the words: "Just hid below[,] remaining bound". That will give it the proper emphasis. An intriguing idea, to go to church and find discerning minds, ones that should be able to give opinions; yet finding none. Losing your shoes in church, I thought maybe that someone had moved them to joke with you. Oh, one other point, in the first line last stanza, maybe use [underneath]? [The rhythm seems to need it]. ~ Geez.
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is a powerful write for a lot of reasons. I am not an overly religious person, even though I have my beliefs, but feel a loss of faith due to the state of the world, society and people in general. Well done!

Love the rhyme. The loss of faith is such a sad thing. I lost my faith in the church long ago, but mercifully I kept my faith in Christ. This poem reminds me of Matthew Arnold's, Dover Beach. "The Sea of Faith was once, too, at the full, and round earth’s shore...but now I only hear Its melancholy, long, withdrawing roar, retreating..." This echoed the 19th Century's loss of faith. Is that what you are saying in your poem? Oh, Good use of enjambment, as well as rhyme.

With the passing of time, with the world changing as it is. Simple faith is being lost to insanity. Whatever faith you follow I've always believed that to live with love & hope in your heart isn't a bad thing. As Dr's say "Do no harm". If it harms no one having faith and being open to new ideas. Truly open can never be a bad thing. I could go on but I want you to know that I absolutely love this poem. You're writing is an honour to read to be with you all is a blessing. Congratulations on a superb write.

Much love

Jayne x