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The Sun The Moon and Lovedly Again Back Soon
I am ceasing my breath
but gradually
come some Neos help me
to breathe
My heart is palpitating slowly
will they snatch
Lovedly from me
My lungs are still gasping
would they pray
the Covid for me
twill be blasphemy
let my remaining years
stay with me
I beseech as
LOVEDLY
this is just a quest
later may become
a request
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
In Hope Lovedly lives
S T I L L
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Geezer
Sat, 2021-06-12 01:27
I see your...
passion for the name and hope that you may return to it soon. Fear not, sir Lovedly, your rightful title is still untarnished! Write on! ~ Geez.
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ROSYME
Sat, 2021-06-12 11:49
Thanks Gee
hopefully
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