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HUNGER

HUNGER
no bread to feed
my hunger
no drink to quench
my thirst
a spirit left to its death
scattered pieces of a soul
lost in one breath
my heart beats
a rhythm almost to still.
yet by some magic
or holy thing within
my will gives birth
to a light
bright enough
to endure this earth
and feed the peace
I hunger

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You described my message beautifully and tothe point. Thanks, Lonnie.

joe

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and most of all

G R E E D Y

mostly

You share freely
admiringly

and

lovedly

loved

Yes!

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you say yes
I add
great

loved

Thanks, my friend for enjying my work.

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