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HUNGER
HUNGER
no bread to feed
my hunger
no drink to quench
my thirst
a spirit left to its death
scattered pieces of a soul
lost in one breath
my heart beats
a rhythm almost to still.
yet by some magic
or holy thing within
my will gives birth
to a light
bright enough
to endure this earth
and feed the peace
I hunger
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Comments
Geremia
Sat, 2012-03-10 22:35
You described my message
You described my message beautifully and tothe point. Thanks, Lonnie.
joe
loved
Sun, 2012-03-11 10:48
We are hungry .... thirsty
and most of all
G R E E D Y
mostly
You share freely
admiringly
and
lovedly
loved
Geremia
Sun, 2012-03-11 11:45
Yes!
Yes!
loved
Mon, 2012-03-12 13:09
Short and sweet
you say yes
I add
great
loved
Geremia
Mon, 2012-03-12 14:30
Thanks, my friend for enjying
Thanks, my friend for enjying my work.