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PARTING

Submitted by Geremia on Wed, 2016-12-21 13:52

PARTING
I will be an angel on your shoulder
whispering in your ear
not to cry. not to fear
and never despair ,
you see : how could i
let you know
the pain of loneliness…
I will still be here

Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

Comments

alidzain

Wed, 2016-12-21 21:46

alidzain's picture

Really admire your passion, bro. Another good write. Kudos to you.

Alid

valene

Thu, 2016-12-22 11:06

When I read this, it touched my heart....I think because it comes from the heart!
The opening line is so touching and from there your words continue to carry out your message!
Well done!

valene

lovedly

Thu, 2016-12-22 12:19

lovedly's picture

Joe in hearts of poets
who love contain
u will
surely remain

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