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HOUR GLASS
HOUR GLASS
A sudden winter chill
stills the night
and steals the fire of day.
my light grows dim
the past fades into oblivion.
there is no place to hide
and I am lost in Time.
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Comments
weirdelf
Fri, 2013-11-08 11:56
Sir wordcrafter,
Not a word or letter out of place. A darkly smoldering gem.
If you would like to hear my reading of it right click on this link.
http://vocaroo.com/i/s1zyVPA9OlYp
cheers,
Jess
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Geremia
Fri, 2013-11-08 16:04
appreciated
appreciated, I did hear reading.ir was read as I meant it to be understood, thanks, jess.
joe
loved
Fri, 2013-11-08 16:05
welcome back
and we must all address you as
SIR
in caps
loved
Geremia
Fri, 2013-11-08 16:37
Thanks. I don't write much
Thanks. I don't write much lately. Appreciate your kindness.
joe
Seren
Sun, 2013-11-10 01:11
Dearest Joe
I agree with Jess not a word out of place, its a wonderful poem I cant pick a favourite line or phrase its flawless
bravo
much love your Jayne xxx
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
Geremia
Wed, 2013-11-27 17:46
Thanks, my Jane. I've been
Thanks, my Jane. I've been long to answer.
joe
loved
Wed, 2013-11-27 17:48
glad to see u over here
that shows u have
WILL POWER
loved
Geremia
Thu, 2013-11-28 10:38
As always...thanks. :)
As always...thanks. :)
Nordic cloud
Fri, 2013-12-13 13:58
Just beautiful. Love Anni
Just beautiful.
Love Anni
"The image of yourself which you see in a mirror Is dead,
but the reflection of the moon on water, lives." Kenzan.
Geremia
Fri, 2013-12-13 16:49
As is your own spirit,
As is your own spirit,
Love
Longobardolino