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Buddha Says

Life is but a choice
Laundering dirty money
Or doing laundry

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Hello, Sen,
Very clever, great structure, and a wonderful philosophy! Very wise!
Thank you,

Hi thanks kind comment, have a great day

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Now hear me

Have a wife
enjoy life
as and when
else marry strife
in lieu of women

This is a very original idea. It’s inspiring and I’d like to use this concept as a part of my individual growth. I’ve been doing laundry forever and I’ll continue to do so.

Well done,

Hi thanks glad it resonated with you, its nice to inspire someone else

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