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Birthday Wishes

Submitted by Kammy O. on Sun, 2022-12-04 21:11

A decade plus seven
Shows how old we are today
Thanks to GOD in heaven
We made it through all the way

Truly life's a roller coaster
Which we don't seem to understand
Till we get older
Then it becomes clearer

It's been an amazing journey
With him by my side
We got through all our worries and thrived

He has a dazzling smile
Which you could picture from a mile
Happy birthday to my handsome man
You'll always be mine

And for my self
A damsel and a queen
You are the best
A blessed being

Happy birthday Kamsy and Kamto
The world's greatest twins
Indeed YOU WERE BORN TO WIN!!!

Cheers to this new year
And others to come
May the lord grant us happiness
And many more blessings from above

Last few words:

Today is our (my twin brother and I) birthday. We are 17 today. It's been an amazing journey for us despite the challenges that came our way as special needs teenagers living with Cerebral Palsy. We look forward to wonderful years together.

Editing stage:

Editing - rough draft

Content level:

Not Explicit Content

Comments

Lavender

Mon, 2022-12-05 18:55

Birthday Wishes

Happy Birthday! Best wishes to you both!
Lavender

Kammy O.

Tue, 2022-12-06 00:17

Thank you!

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Geezer

Tue, 2022-12-06 10:41

Happy Birthday...

A great piece and a tribute to the love you share with your brother. Nice work! ~ Geezer.
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Kammy O.

Sun, 2022-12-11 21:35