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2020
Quarantined wishes
masked dreams, and more coffined plans
Death is everywhere
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Structured: Eastern
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Rula
Sun, 2020-03-29 15:52
Dear Mark
Can't thank you enough for passing by with these encouraging words. Always appreciated!
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Geezer
Sun, 2020-03-29 17:11
At first...
I thought that you meant confined plans, but then I understood; coffined plans, a double meaning?
~ Geezer.
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This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
Rula
Sun, 2020-03-29 17:39
Thank you Gee
Inspired by everything goes around, I thought coffined goes well with masks and quarantines, hope that that makes sense.
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Gracy
Sun, 2020-03-29 19:15
Good one, I don't know
Good one, I don't know whether this is a special form, but I'd suggest your turning it into 4 lines. An idea to TorT, of course.
BTW, do you all see my poems and comments, because Gee says I'm posting in a place where only I can see the poems. Please let me know because it's become an issue. I don't see anywhere else to post. Tx
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Rula
Mon, 2020-03-30 14:28
Hello Gracy
So happy to see you on my page.your comment is v. much welcomed.
To answer your question, this is a 5_7_5 haiku form though not a haiku theme I guess
Many thanks
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lovedly
Mon, 2020-03-30 09:36
new words have been heard
Rula from you
after years coffined or confined
anything is possible
WHITE GHOSTLY CASTS
But like angels complete their task
you fairly unmask
courageous medicinal flask
if anyone does ask
Rula
Mon, 2020-03-30 14:30
Hello Lovedly
Thank you. Always great to know that fresh words are being used. I guess this is something positive, isn't it?
Highly appreciate your visit.
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lovedly
Mon, 2020-03-30 14:37
yeah for sure
do read my OWLISH (poetry )
night bird
Lovedly
All my poems are germinated in my dreams
in the morning
I collect the buds seeds and leaves
Rula you would love to now read