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What I keep saying to those standing in front of me
The last thing you wanna do
Is waiting in a queue
Sweating,
With numbing feet,
Time reluctantly passes
Be wise , think about it
Do not hesitate
Whatever you're waiting for
It s not worth it
So,
quit it
I know you shan't regret it.
I'll take the burden off
and wait in the queue
Instead of you
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Sun, 2024-04-28 13:00
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Leslie
Sun, 2024-04-28 17:52
Rula...
This was my favorite today. I wish only that fear had not such powerful sway. Thank you I will try to take your advice. Another
wonderful emancipating poem.
The power of our language can and will change the world.
Successively until our languages become one!
Leslie
Sun, 2024-04-28 17:56
Rula
You can wait there for me. I'm venturing courageously into the treasures held within the unknown.
The power of our language can and will change the world.
Successively until our languages become one!
Leslie
Mon, 2024-04-29 06:25
Rula...
Hesitation is the close counterpart of fear. I love this poem. It puts things in their proper
perspective for my current situation. I know now that I must no longer act as a child
and make important decisioins.
The power of our language can and will change the world.
Successively until our languages become one!
Rula
Mon, 2024-04-29 12:19
Hello Leslie
I am so grateful for your wonderful comments. It's my pleasure to know that you enjoyed this one.
Always appreciate your visit.
Thank you!
❤❤❤❤❤❤
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author commenttyro
Mon, 2024-04-29 08:13
Hello dear Rula
A very altruistic view, presenting a soft and caring temperament. How wonderful the world would be with more as you.
T
The most powerful reaction
of mind on mind
is transference of sight
Rula
Mon, 2024-04-29 12:25
Hello dear tyro
I can't say how much I appreciate your visit.
How kind of you to leave such a comment.
Thank you indeed!
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