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THE DITCHED HOTEL
The abandoned hotel was
concealed, shrouded and
took possession by coils
and tassles of poltergeist-
grey mist.
Aggravating staff and
and guests giving know
option but to dissappear
Backflows and spirals like
a ghouls breath mantled
the forest and guest house.
Navigating and
twisting Into the abyss black
tunnels and up staircases
with an ethereal glow. Like
nosey guests going over
the place with a torch
Investigating like an detective
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Wed, 2024-10-16 11:05
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Candlewitch
Wed, 2024-10-16 11:10
Dear Joker,
I much enjoyed your take on the contest! I especially enjoyed these lines:
twisting Into the abyss black
tunnels and up staircases
with an ethereal glow. Like
nosey guests going over
the place with a torch
Investigating like an detective
good luck on the contest!
*hugs, Cat
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Jokerface82
Wed, 2024-10-16 11:25
Thank you Cat
Good luck ! Was fun
Jokerface82
Wed, 2024-10-16 11:24
Wtf
I'm not sure why I have been flagged?
Candlewitch
Wed, 2024-10-16 13:05
Dear Joker,
did I do something wrong? why were you flagged? what does it mean to be flagged? can I help?
hugs, Cat
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Jokerface82
Wed, 2024-10-16 15:04
I got a text
Saying flagged no cat you're r good
Rula
Wed, 2024-10-16 13:49
Joker
The imagery in poetry WS. is concluded long ago. Maybe that's why!
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Jokerface82
Wed, 2024-10-16 15:06
W s?
What's W, S?
Rula
Wed, 2024-10-16 15:09
Workshop
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Candlewitch
Wed, 2024-10-16 15:14
Dear Joker,
Talk to Mark or Paul if you need to clear it up... they are good people who know what they are doing and can help you.
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Jokerface82
Wed, 2024-10-16 15:59
Thank you
I'm getting it sorted and getting some insight data