The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem "In The Dark Of Night (old wooden clock?)" effectively uses auditory imagery to create a suspenseful atmosphere. The repetition of the "tick-tock" sound and the comparison of the heart's beat to an "old worn drum" in a "massive rocky cavern" contribute to this atmosphere.

However, the poem could benefit from more varied language and imagery. For instance, the phrase "sweat icy cold" is somewhat clichéd and could be replaced with a more original description.

Additionally, the poem could explore the speaker's emotions in more depth. While it is clear that the speaker is anxious, the poem does not delve into why the speaker feels this way or how these feelings evolve over the course of the poem.

The title could also be more closely connected to the content of the poem. While the title suggests that the poem will be about the nighttime, the poem itself is more focused on the sound of the clock and the speaker's reaction to it. A more fitting title might be something like "The Old Wooden Clock" or "Tick-Tock in the Night."

Lastly, the poem's rhythm could be improved. The lines vary widely in length, which can disrupt the flow of the poem. Consistent line lengths or a more regular rhythmic pattern could make the poem more pleasing to read and hear.

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This really sends chills to my spine.
The haunting atmosphere of the black clock echoing the heart beats is a powerful imagery.
I wonder what could have inspired such a poem.
Thank you for sharing dear.

I sense a haunting terror on a cold dark night. I wondered what it was you may have feared, besides the ticking of the clock. Something I might add would be a change in the third line. I think it would read a litte better by saying that it "runs chills along my spine. Another wonderful write! Lastly where does the cavern fit in. Is it real or was it just in your mind.

Hello, Cat,
This has a rich tempo to it that almost captures the same rhythm of the clock, building up to the even stronger rhythm of the old worn drum. Almost. Maybe tighten the last few lines so that the reader feels/hears the vibrant rhythm, the echo of the anxious beating heart. I enjoyed this eerie piece!
Thank you!
L
(I like "Old Wooden Clock") :)

sounds counter point
to every beat of my heart
echoing like the thudding of
an old worn drum...

I like these lines but the rest is like kindagarden child like and basic, also a drum in a cave? never seen one haha

the significance of the drums in the cave. The cave being you and the drum your heart. It's likely that you felt the dream raise your heart rate and blood pressure. People tend to integrate real happenings into their dreams. ~ Geez.
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