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Where did life go?
What would I do without You?
Life is like a trap, but I am barely breathing.
Lost, close by, could I come, and ring to your door?
What am I supposed to do?
Silent to barely.
I don't know if I can still keep breathing.
You knew me since the breakdown,
when I was mad, crazy, and insane.
Barely.
But.
What am I gonna do?
What am I supposed to do?
When I am barely breathing.
Alone, in my quiet room,
without your feelings?
Should I, look in this room, for you,
or stop.
Quiet, and stop breathing?
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