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PLACES
PLACES
I dreamed a dream
of times gone by
of a world
I thought would never die:
soothing voices,
warm embraces
hearts beating as one.
But the world doesn't speak to me
the way it did before
and all I knew has faded
into Memory's languid caress.
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Comments
alidzain
Thu, 2014-09-11 11:48
Hey, Geremia
this piece started as the voice of everyone's dream and the despair which comes wth time, maybe seeing the dream out of reach. emmm, may I ask why you entitled it "Places"? I hope the others will read this. Its a good write.
Alid
Geremia
Thu, 2014-09-11 15:49
each moment in time brings us
each moment in time brings us to a different place in life; memory brings back to places in time which fade away with the years.
thank you,
joe
scribbler
Thu, 2014-09-11 21:41
dang it Joe!
You make it seem so easy to write well. I liked this...a lot and see no room for improving it........stan
Geremia
Fri, 2014-09-12 08:32
:) :) Thanks. Stan
:) :)
Thanks. Stan