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ZARKOPHAKIZZ
Gem cutter
wheel flesh
the drip lash vortex taste
a thunder cry
the waste
harrow flash
the thick laced
pass
net soul catch reach
of burnt rimmed skys
far damp with
tourniquet and lust
staunch stop
deliver
your arrows
bearing found
Becoming heart
a quiver
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Comments
judyanne
Sun, 2012-08-12 02:50
esker
esker
i know not what you say, but i love the way you say it
especially
'your arrows
bearing found
... Becoming heart
a quiver'
oh well i suppose i get most of it - but it takes a lot of reads... which is great, for the read is simply awesomely enjoyable
another masterpiee
love judy
xxx
'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)
Esker
Sun, 2012-08-12 03:17
JUDY.. a grand play of words
ancients believed a special limestone disolved the corpse
or something like this..
gem cutter...dream stars
flesh is the wheel we grind our wants needs drives
into heart faceted love lust obsessons
leaning into it
pressing it forward
chasing the dragon of that forever
the corpse great loves locked in iconic photos
and pressed flat in preserved memory
a tatoo a scar where bright love burned its
ember deep having fallen on hard times
the gauntlet run in harsh valleys
tumultous claim staking and rejections
twisting truths to preserve that which
bleeds out
arrows of words slain hope
and yet even wounded
pride makes the mark
its quiver
"its okay I';ll just hold these
for you... right here through my heart!!"
sarcasm and darkly funny
and then the distortions of language
becomes its own language after awhile
like sleep talking as Ive always said
or dementia the brain fading from
crash or disease and those caretakers
left with the fragments of words and
memories from yesterday or a youths
conquest or loss....
I m happy that your creative soul caught
this and enjoyed its ambling run
YOu dont know how I am grateful to
you for this
Thank You Judyanne!
Esker
Sat, 2012-08-18 10:42
Thank You Lonnie
Poor brains can see what richly fed immobile brains cannot
patterns that rise in abstract to form into thoughts
I love abstract art
imagine how abstract the fifties were when poetry
in america was starting to gather momentum in the
coffee houses and apartments and bars
where the quiet or flamboyant young men and women
of their day were on that wave america was growing
and elsewhere too
when it was Hip
like Our ancient generation today picking up the sayings
of the youth rather then try to push it away like my generation
parents disliked the hippies
the power of the new is alive
the working of form and style
of course it will never be for every one
but it was for every hundred
and more
the greats did not stop but kept
on writing as it was their passion
to continue
much like we do here
poetry is a way of life
thank you Lonnie