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WINGS
WINGS
Where are the wings you promised me
where is is the wind that will carry me
to the stars
where is the womb that will hold me
where are the voices that will lead me
far
into the light
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Comments
Esker
Thu, 2013-08-08 15:06
quest
the edge
the mirage of creativity and
ponder....
we live the lives of heartfelt
striving
conquests and the shadows
that give us profile
there is always more...
Thank You
Geremia
Fri, 2013-08-09 07:41
we live the lives of
we live the lives of heartfelt
striving
conquests and the shadows
that give us profile
This is poetry. Stunned by your imagery ,Steven.
Thank you,
Jow
Race_9togo
Thu, 2013-08-08 23:44
Joe,
Only you can take anger, doubt and fervent belief, give them timelessness, and pack them all into just 7 lines.
Damned good, brother, damned good.
Respectfully, Race
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Geremia
Fri, 2013-08-09 07:43
I thank you for that, Jim,
I thank you for that, Jim,
Joe