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whippowhirl
in the will the malestrom knows
of candlelight progression
in ceremony forest sheild
the train has ground to its
stop steaming
simmering Its lamps like
fate shines in the mist
one step two
into the deep
though the fear of
chaos is unpleasant
a taste
there is no handicap
of haste
we are mere
matter
existing
sending and
recieving
the terror
and the beauty
of the bane
and wonderful
an adventure
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brittle light
Fri, 2016-06-03 00:24
I'm always dismayed by those
I'm always dismayed by those who wish for perfect equanimity...sounds boring to me; an adventure that never is adventurous!
I hope I got the gist, I like your words even if not.
Al
Esker
Mon, 2016-06-06 15:03
dutiful passion
destination in creation....cheap resilence that survives memory!
thank U! its basic often the passage....
author commentmand
Fri, 2016-06-03 06:10
Hi Esker
Always love your imagery - this is no exception. Life is like a mixture of beauty and beast.
Thought provoking poems :)
Love Mand xxx
Esker
Mon, 2016-06-06 15:05
oh my....beastly beauty...sometimes the best
although safe sate is fine! danger is the spice for wild tastes!
L'image In nation leagues of dream...
thank u!
author commentjane210660
Sun, 2016-06-05 03:46
To me a poem of
To me a poem of juxtapositions.
Just like life.
I like the imagery in this. Jx
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Esker
Mon, 2016-06-06 15:06
contrast
I shall forever live outside the box
thank U!
author commentjane210660
Mon, 2016-06-06 15:22
It's a good job some of us do
It's a good job some of us do, the world would be a boring place if we all lived within the same set perimeters. Jxx
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