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A Walk with You

Submitted by Michael Anthony on Mon, 2024-01-01 12:28

We invited the sun to join us.
To come out from behind that sullen cloud
and share with us late in the morning.

With amber light breaking through,
in tow as company for the day,
our hands were together and warmed
but not by the busy sun.

No offense was taken,
our yellow star assured us,
as we walked between the shadows
being painted all around us.

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