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Good Read

Submitted by Michael Anthony on Fri, 2024-04-26 23:30

Their memories shape and blend who I am.
Those I miss and are no longer here.
They’re like a crazy-long book that feels way to brief,

filled with short stories I never tire of. With each reading
from my book of hearts, I am grateful to the gifted authors
who share with me freely, what they still want to say,
written with love in stories that will always reside there.

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Review Request (Direction): 
What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Last few words: 
Oh grief, I wish you were not my frequent muse.
Editing stage: 
Editing - polished draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Rula

Sat, 2024-04-27 15:42

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Hello,
This is really an enjoyable read.You give spirit to a subject that I would never write about.
I too am grateful to all those gifted authors.
You said this so well. I have nothing to suggest but lots of appreciation.
Thank you for appreciation

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Michael Anthony

Fri, 2024-05-03 09:42

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Thank you for the visit and sharing your thoughts on this piece Rula!

Best

Michael Anthony

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