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Vial
in the room
a rose under glass
stories bound
to page in a book
turn the cover
one must
look
winter winds
howl like
pack of wolves
...
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Comments
eightmenout
Tue, 2015-11-10 11:14
Steve
Your writing seems to be evolving, morphing into different images. I hope you enjoy the adventure, the risks and adrenaline that comes as a "friend with benefits" to change.
Scott
Esker
Wed, 2015-11-11 10:33
risk is adrenaline
benifit of change....much there of this.. roles made for the right mixture to play
only feel like im living when i know i might be dying
Pugilist
Tue, 2015-11-10 21:12
I always enjoy your work
I've said it before, but it bears repeating, you have a lyrical voice in your poems and I thoroughly appreciate your talent.
With this piece, I like the way I am led through the story and the ending is a good juxtaposition to the introduction.
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Jonathan Moore
Esker
Wed, 2015-11-11 10:35
yah....like that
finding that voice was brutally hard
and ive paid for it...wow..over and over
but glad u like it
this one was short
a lot like the older works were too
thanks
ThEdges
Wed, 2015-11-11 20:40
Esker, I haven't read all
of your poems, but I've never seen you write one so short. This is very good.
Best always,
Laura